I like how specifically the descriptions apply to the person your writing about. "smile only you could put on this face"
i smile for lots of people there is a very certain smile that i only have when sharing senses and words with my special someone. very nice.
the ending is one of those soo sad but at least some closure feelings. those hopeful wishes for the person's well being who is gone are the only things that make their depart bearable.
love it.