Leap of Faith

Such beautiful lines. You write so well. Where can I get some of this talent?
l didn't even have to read it twice, which says a lot. Please, don't stop writing.

Good imagery, flow, the rhyming isn't forced...the rhythm is good. I am sure many can relate to the feelings you convey in this piece. Great job.....now this is the kind of poem worth nominating!

Beautiful. Simply heart-wrenching and lovable.
I love the soft emotions in it.

Eyes drift along a lonely cloud
Dream of days gone by
When life was filled with innocence
And love had yet to die
^My fave :)

Well done hunnie. Haven't read your stuff in a while..so sorry..
Write on~

A short yet an emotion-filled piece indeed..My heart ached a bit while going through this poem of yours..Loved the smooth flow the rythm and the sad tone presented..I just have one suggestion to make though, since this was already a short poem maybe you can alter the word "drift" in the i think 2nd or 3rd stanza..
Wonderfully penned Jen, as always..

You always have such a smooth flow to your poems Jenn!

Arms embrace a whirling wind
Flight is taken fast
Before a doubt can take away
The hope they saved for last
^^^
Love your ending stanza.

Wonderful read Jenn