Wow, this is such an amazing read! The first stanza got me captured and I really loved what followed. I can't pick out the stanza which I really love for the first time because all was so beautiful! This piece deserves a 5/5 (:

You always have such a smooth flow to your poems Jenn!

Arms embrace a whirling wind
Flight is taken fast
Before a doubt can take away
The hope they saved for last
^^^
Love your ending stanza.

Wonderful read Jenn

A short yet an emotion-filled piece indeed..My heart ached a bit while going through this poem of yours..Loved the smooth flow the rythm and the sad tone presented..I just have one suggestion to make though, since this was already a short poem maybe you can alter the word "drift" in the i think 2nd or 3rd stanza..
Wonderfully penned Jen, as always..

Beautiful. Simply heart-wrenching and lovable.
I love the soft emotions in it.

Eyes drift along a lonely cloud
Dream of days gone by
When life was filled with innocence
And love had yet to die
^My fave :)

Well done hunnie. Haven't read your stuff in a while..so sorry..
Write on~

Good imagery, flow, the rhyming isn't forced...the rhythm is good. I am sure many can relate to the feelings you convey in this piece. Great job.....now this is the kind of poem worth nominating!

Such beautiful lines. You write so well. Where can I get some of this talent?
l didn't even have to read it twice, which says a lot. Please, don't stop writing.