Comments : Unending Wend

  • 14 years ago

    by eezebard

    2nd last line is supposed to be ... "Deja Vu"
    Don't know what happened there

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    You can edit and fix 'De ja Vu" That happens when you cut and paste from Word or some other word processing program. The site has trouble with apostrophes, quotation marks, etc...

    Anyway - What a journey this poem is! It's like a shamanic journey, a dream where you think you know what's going on - what's going to happen next, and there you are, back at the beginning. Very intriguing poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by eezebard

    Thanks Corinne ... passing through life and repeating our mistakes is a flaw shared by the majority ... me being one, to be sure.
    :o)
    life is an unending wend