Your too sweet to me sour!
^You're too sweet to BE sour^
i think you meant to put that. real nice ending line in my opinion. :)

it was a little confusing at first, but as it got towards the middle and end i caught on. :)

the only thing that i can recommend for improvement on this is to space some lines out. like in the 3rd line you can press ENTER after UNKNOWN. you know, stuff like that.

your words only ring truth. thanks for sharing
~Kuro