I really like how you used the same words twice at the begginning of each stanza. It made a really good affect. As for these stanzas:

"Masked fantasies, masked realities,
I begin to notice your true desires.

Unspoken silences, all quiet and hidden,
Masks away the truth of our love."

I would use a different word than masked in the first stanza since you have masks in the next three stanzas
but other than that it was a really good poem

Great Write and keep it up

Thanks once again. The reason I put masks in the next three stanza though was because for every first words in the first five stanzas were then used in the next three. I’m not sure if you noticed that. But I’ll try to fix it up when I can or when I at least get some more opinions. I want to see how others feel about the word “masks” being used a few times. But thanks for your input. It’s really going to help me improve on my future poems.

Thank you once again. and im planning to change that part when i have the time, because other people have commented on the "masks" part as well. thanks so much for your input.