The title definitely caught my attention. It was just odd, because people usually say the exact opposite. Haha. I think such a short poem had a really dramatic impact. Very well done. :]

~C.

Haha Luna, Facade master is a he, whilst the one he was lying to would be a she. Eeps, sorry for the confusion girl! XP

I have been doing some fighting with this form,but think you have done an excellent job here, especially with the ending, i think it was a great closing. Nice work.

^Agreed..Beautifully penned Landy..XD..Loved how the poem fits with the given quotes..Loved the form as well..And i should applaud you for your achievement..Not all RTVW members can do this, including myself, although i might give it a try sometime later..I also noticed the strict compliance in terms of syllabic units..However if you'll take a look again at the rhyme pattern which is abbcbccaccbcbba, I think the 3rd and 6th B werent adhering to the rhyme pattern. If you notice the past tense of conceal dint rhyme with feel..

Wow. That is deep!! Way to go! :-)

Very Nicely Done!!!