Colors

I really like the way this one was written and all the feelings it bestows. One of my favorites for sure.

This poem has to be one of the best I've read in a while. I love your style of writing... how you put so much thought/feelings into your words that many can relate to. I've always wanted to write a poem like this... using colours to write about life . Awesome!

This my favourite lines...

"Blue is for the tears I've cried
Trying to understand this life"

and the last stanza is so profound....

"Grey is for the world I see now
Lost are the colors that they allow
White is for the life I wanted
Perceptions skewed, and haunted
Black is for the dreams I have slept
The part of me no one can accept "

You have my nomination for the weekly contest..:) An Excellent piece.

Words so colorful. A very good poem, regardless if it diddn't all rhme. Your theme is a very good idea, and the feel of your lines was very strong.

Absolutly loved it from start to finish. The colour thing was quite ingenious..i think just one line didnt deem to flow but the rest of the poem - being awesome makes up for that. I love the structure this piece has, and agin, i love your vocabulary. a non sticking one is great. well done.IBE