Absolutly loved it from start to finish. The colour thing was quite ingenious..i think just one line didnt deem to flow but the rest of the poem - being awesome makes up for that. I love the structure this piece has, and agin, i love your vocabulary. a non sticking one is great. well done.IBE

Words so colorful. A very good poem, regardless if it diddn't all rhme. Your theme is a very good idea, and the feel of your lines was very strong.

This poem has to be one of the best I've read in a while. I love your style of writing... how you put so much thought/feelings into your words that many can relate to. I've always wanted to write a poem like this... using colours to write about life . Awesome!

This my favourite lines...

"Blue is for the tears I've cried
Trying to understand this life"

and the last stanza is so profound....

"Grey is for the world I see now
Lost are the colors that they allow
White is for the life I wanted
Perceptions skewed, and haunted
Black is for the dreams I have slept
The part of me no one can accept "

You have my nomination for the weekly contest..:) An Excellent piece.

I really like the way this one was written and all the feelings it bestows. One of my favorites for sure.