Comments : The Daughter You Never Had. xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Saffie
    This is such a sweet touching poem. I'm sure your friend is honored you wrote this for her.
    Good job!
    ~hugs~
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    Aww I liked it. it was heartfelt and moving. =) Great job

  • 14 years ago

    by xXUnKnOwNXx

    I really liked your poem.
    Although in this line,
    "I'd try and protect you form any pain" I think you mean from?

    Overall, great job :)

  • 13 years ago

    by IbaKer

    It's beautiful and very touching. I really love it

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    What can I say, I am deeply touched reading this. I do not have a daughter of my own to love and spoil, but just reading this poem brings out the emotions. Your write is simple, from the heart and I am sure the person for whom it was written would have been touched more than I if he got to read it.

    What you illustrated here was unselfish and unconditional love for a father figure. He must be someone special. I wish I could fit his shoes. Adorable little piece. :)