Your Special Box. xx

by Baby Rainbow   Jan 11, 2010


I cannot wait till this is done.
Making this has been so fun.
I know it took a little while
I just cant wait to see your smile.

This will help you every day
I hope it helps you feel okay.
And if you have to stay in bed
You can read the things I've said.

This special box is just for you
Cos spoiling you is what I do.
I even made sure it was black
I'm just so glad to have you back.

Saffie. xx

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  • 11 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Aww, I feel so special haha

    I'm the only one who has comment on it, except that Everlasting up there.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This poem is really sweet,

    I enjoyed reading the rhymes, they didn't feel force.

    There is just one little typo, I think.

    "I know its took a little while"

    Its.. I think the "s" shouldn't be there.
    It took a little while.

    Other than that, I like it. It has sentiment on it.

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