This poem is really sweet,

I enjoyed reading the rhymes, they didn't feel force.

There is just one little typo, I think.

"I know its took a little while"

Its.. I think the "s" shouldn't be there.
It took a little while.

Other than that, I like it. It has sentiment on it.

Aww, I feel so special haha

I'm the only one who has comment on it, except that Everlasting up there.