Love's fool

I would sacrifice all to relive this dance
but my vision rides away on the breeze

This is just so beautiful, very nice written dear indeed.

all the best and take care

The beginning was beautiful & then the poem dwindled to sadness but nevertheless a wonderful write. Heartbreaking words in the last few stanzas - well done .

Love can make us feel like this and when it is gone we want to experience it again. Part of our makeup, I think. Well done.

Anthony
What a heart breaking piece. Full of beautiful memories.

I would sacrifice all to relive this dance
but my vision rides away on the breeze
only memories remain of our romance,
alone I weep 'till the tears become seas.

This stanza really brought the tears. It is so hard to live with just memories. No matter how beautiful. The reality of not having that love with you anymore. brings so much pain.
Ecellent job!
Take care
Cindy

A powerful love poem, that just grips the heart. You express so much feeling in your poems/with your words Anthony, that make your poems feel real to the reader. You have a great rhyme and flow too! Guess where this poem is going? .. On my favourites list :)

Awesome piece.