Comments : My Musings...

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    A building up of deep emotion,
    a spilling forth of what's inside..
    my pen takes me on a journey,
    from which I cannot hide

    This is simply great piece of imagination and so beautifully expressed, loved the whole poem as its unique and shows your love for poetry :)

    Great write dear

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    This really relates to so many and I'm sure will touch everyone that reads your words.

    A building up of deep emotion,
    a spilling forth of what's inside..
    my pen takes me on a journey,
    from which I cannot hide

    This stanza stands out to me. Because I don't know what I would do with out my pen and paper. I still write on paper and then put it in the computer. I pick that pen up at the oddest times :)
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Olwin, I think you have captured how we all feel about our writing. It takes us places, sad and happy, all a part of our lives. I would be lost without my pen and paper. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Brilliant Olwin, very nicely done. Writing can really do a lot for us, so have to keep that pen & paper by us when we need to write.