Heyhey people just a few more poems, some feedback to work off would be appreciated!

WOW! you write so beautiful poems. I guess it your title's keeping the people away. ITs so confusing. We forget which we read which we didn't.
Why don't you keep a different titles? If you want the numberings.. you can always keep it inside the poem..

Really, your poems are good. I will recommend others to read these.