Such few words can speak so loud & be so powerful. This did just that -- the past can be very haunting in one's future. Very true indeed -- well done.

Meena
Wonderful job on the club challenge :) So much sadness portrayed in each word.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Screams pray
for punishment
each day

Now that i have tried this form myself, i can be honest while saying that this is tough yaar but you surely made it look so simple. I really liked the stanza above.

all the best and take care

Its hard to get away from the ghost of past... but then life is too short to remeber those moments... beautifully penned... very touching..

As usual you did a wonderful job with the form. It is sad with a powerful message.