Wow such a deep poem of emotion and frustration. I must say I can relate to this--& am sure many of us know of someone who either smokes or drinks alcohol or something for that matter that is extremely harmful to their body & could kill them at any second -- yet they are so blind to realize it themselves & blind to realize how it effects the people around them. They definatly do just dig themselves into a darker , deeper hole that they may never escape from. They never reach happiness & they wonder why. I could totally connect with this poem... seems to me as if you took the words from my mouth. Awesome job. |
by Lady Nik
I'm with Temps on this hun. Such a deep and expressive piece. I don't have many words for this piece, because it was so great. I'm sorry but I'm really stuck here lol. I feel like this has taken me back to first grade and I have no idea how to tell you how amazing this was. Wows....noce job deary *hugs* Nik |
by Sylvia
Self destructive people seem to take down the people who love and care about them. The sad thing is they usually don't realize or don't care if they do. |
by Soft Parade
Thank you for expressing those sentiments which I have felt about one of my friedns for quite some time, reading your poem has taken some weight off my conciounce, you have shed some light in my life where it had been dominated by his shadow. |