Dancing Forever

by Lady Nik   Jan 13, 2010


We tried this dance once
falling over each others
feet, missing each step
defying the beat. But
you seem so much
more in tune to
the underlying harmony
my heart plays when
you kiss my nose.

Music notes tremble
when we are close
together. Your hand in
mine, twirling me
around on this glossy
floor. The only eyes
on us are those
of the evening stars.

Time has molded us into
the best of our kind.
Swiftly moving like
bolts of lightening
through a hailstorm--

powerful
dangerous and so
beautiful...

Let's hold hands
and destroy worlds
of silent steps. Just me
tied to you...for eternity

*Thanks for the title Jeff :) *

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Romantic! :D
    I love your dark poems...but I am in love with your love poems lol. You do such a wonderful job with your choice of vocabulary. I know that I say that quite often, but it is so true. Such great imagery and flow.

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I know you always get on my case about writing to many love poems :p haha But its because their the ones that relate to what make me happy and thats my fiancee. All the things you say and describe in your poem I can invision in my head and it makes me smile. Excellent flow and great description 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    "Let's hold hands
    and destroy worlds"

    i don't entirely know why, but i LOVE that line. it just seems so POWERFUL.
    again, the enjambment works so well!
    it is such a simple poem, but it says so much so clearly.

    5/5 :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the romance in this read and the love
    it holds..very nicely penned!

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