I like the romance in this read and the love
it holds..very nicely penned!

"Let's hold hands
and destroy worlds"

i don't entirely know why, but i LOVE that line. it just seems so POWERFUL.
again, the enjambment works so well!
it is such a simple poem, but it says so much so clearly.

5/5 :D

I know you always get on my case about writing to many love poems :p haha But its because their the ones that relate to what make me happy and thats my fiancee. All the things you say and describe in your poem I can invision in my head and it makes me smile. Excellent flow and great description 5/5

Romantic! :D
I love your dark poems...but I am in love with your love poems lol. You do such a wonderful job with your choice of vocabulary. I know that I say that quite often, but it is so true. Such great imagery and flow.