This poem has a great free flow expressing a skillfully dark emotion

Very descriptve, you can actually see this girl and the pain she feels.
great job

This is more poetic prose than true poetry. which i like. i find when people concentrate more on rythm,rhyme and form etc that there writing is pretty but meaningless. it lacks soul. but this poem had real meaning to it. i know i have often felt that this person i am is not me. i did find the last stanza slightly disjointed from the rest of the poem but that is probably just me. i really did like this piece anyway good job

Great job with this free flow poem. I adored the emotion you put into this piece. I have read a lot of your poems, and I believe that this is one of your best writes. Loved the fact that you kept it simple, yet said so much through the emotion. Dont change a thing. Loved it. 5/5.

-KJ

Wow that was really cool and it straight foward...the ending bit about the reflection and the concept is actually really original. and the nonoriginal concepts in it are depicted originally. reading the shattering of the mirror part was painful and i think that's what you were tryin to get across. noice.

Either a good story, or nice lyrics for a song, both ways it's not a poem in my opinion. The stanzas were'nt alike, the lines were a mess, no rhymes whatsoever. The story is nice for itself, but there were no metaphores or any other poetical means. Liked the story though, for that I'll present 3/5

This was done pretty well I just thought like "where are you taking me with this?" I wasn't sure at times where it was going. I understand its about losing yourself and not recognizing the face in the mirror anymore I just thought it was a bit dull. It was good but I know you have better in you 4/5