I also enjoyed reading this. i feel like there's a much deeper meaning than any of us can ever see and or even begin to understand. i think that's great. it was beautiful :) |
by supratim
Rocky u rocks!! Its a beautiful poem !!! |
I thought this piece was pretty strong and rather unique to be honest. The flow wasn't bad and the imagery was done really well. I loved the lines "I can hear a distant voice |
by Sunshine
Shortly...amazing...word choice is perfect |