Its so crazy to stop and imagine all the messed up thoughts that enter all of our minds at random times, that nobody could possibly ever know but ourselves. I thought the poem was dark and twisted, but makes the reader realize the good things in life that make us smile. Excellent work 5/5 Just do my latest "Freedom Cries" figured it would be easier to just tell you here haha Nice work as always

The whispers of our own self-concious, or from an unknown being, who is to say. pretty dark. i liked the part about blood red sky. nice job man
~Ben