Wonderful Olwin. The desire to get closer to that person, and just push all the boundaries is something that is clearly manifested here. I feel this way right now...

A 5 for me .. Most definitely.

As I read this it felt like singing a song..a
heartfelt passionate write..liked it :)

Someone can definatly make you feel this way, very beautiful & expressed nicely.

Awww this was prettiful :) I like, I like a lot. Great poem deary. Nik