Flower Petal Garden(Triple Rictameter)

by Lady Nik   Jan 16, 2010


Flower
my given name
shows multiple faces
grown through rough yet serene places
warmed by sunlit rays of honeysuckle.
Mirror image leaves blow freely
creating music notes
inside my soul.
Flower

Petal
soft like metal.
Summertime rhythm springs
feeling like a winter lily
taking me to a far away kingdom.
Breathing in every unique smell
making new memories
inside my mind.
Petal

Garden
colorful times
playing like a child.
Laughter lingered in my small lungs
universal landmarks outline my cells
wishing I could stay together.
Will you stay forever
inside my heart?
Garden

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  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Their used to be a poem I had in my favorites that was quite like this one. It was amazing how the poem read like going up a hill and then coming back again it was fantastic. The artist left and I don't have the poem or I would have sent it haha but atleast I found one to replace it on my favorites :) Great job I need to write one it looks awesome 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nik
    Great job on the formed poetry challenge. Wow and a triple to boot!
    Beautiful imagery.
    ~hugs~

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice work and Temps is right, you are ambitious. I love the concept you used. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Each part of a flower and the places where it can be seen, is described very well.

    Petal
    soft like metal.
    Summertime rhythm springs
    feeling like a winter lily
    taking me to a far away kingdom.
    Breathing in every unique smell
    making new memories
    inside my mind.
    Petal

    This verse gives a serene feeling to the heart
    liked it :)

  • 14 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hello...this makes me feel dreamy and at home. Nice write.

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