Loved yours dear, way to go above & beyond and outside your box and do a triple -- I would drive myself insane doing that.. its hard enough to do just one stanza, so well done. (: definatly a original piece. one of the more interesting ones I've read from you.

Hello...this makes me feel dreamy and at home. Nice write.

Each part of a flower and the places where it can be seen, is described very well.

Petal
soft like metal.
Summertime rhythm springs
feeling like a winter lily
taking me to a far away kingdom.
Breathing in every unique smell
making new memories
inside my mind.
Petal

This verse gives a serene feeling to the heart
liked it :)

Nice work and Temps is right, you are ambitious. I love the concept you used. Well done.

Nik
Great job on the formed poetry challenge. Wow and a triple to boot!
Beautiful imagery.
~hugs~

Their used to be a poem I had in my favorites that was quite like this one. It was amazing how the poem read like going up a hill and then coming back again it was fantastic. The artist left and I don't have the poem or I would have sent it haha but atleast I found one to replace it on my favorites :) Great job I need to write one it looks awesome 5/5