Nicely done with the side title contest. Did a good job on Dancing Queen, actually had me humming as I read this. Good job.

Temps
I loved what you did with your Title pick. Your words bring a very vivid picture to the mind of the reader,
Great job!
Love Cindy

Funny thing is, Temps, and you are too young to know this, the song by Abba is about a seventeen year old girl and she was the queen of the ball, ha ha and what you have painted with your words is exactly that:)

Nice work, really nice:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Thanks for the explanation, Temps. Rereading it I can see it is indeed about a butterfly, lol..but they are queen of the ball too, in a way;)

Oh Temps you did put this up! And I am ever so delighted!

I would not change a word or a line at all, you pictured the beauty and ease that this queen of the skies truly feels. Wouldn't it be grand to be on her wings?

The last line hit me like a warm sun filled with imagery, and I had a longing to fly high up into the heavens.

Simply stunning my dear.

God bless you and thanks for the read!

~MaryAnne

Aww you posted it =)
I love it J~ probably one of your poems that made me like really feel it.
Love the changes you did, great write hunnie :]

Shine On~
N

The imagery here is just perfect. You have a flawless balnce between imagery and emotion. I loved it. I felt this piece flowed well and kept the reader interested. It wasn't too long and wordy which is also great. A very original and refreshing piece to read. I enjoyd it :) Nik

Where did u get the imagination?
C'mon share some :3 please.
i absolutley adore this
not to long not to short
a perfect refreshing read.