Sylvia
What a different and interesting piece. Can feel the longing to escape in your words. Great job!
Love Cindy

Something entirely different from you, but you did an excellent job. Loved the alliteration scattered throughout & your word choice really reflected the dark mood. Nicely done, I thought you did well.

This is the straight third scary poem i hv read today...what a way to start my morning.

Very scary poem, very nicely expressed and the selection of words...simply outstanding.

all the best and take care

At first I had to laugh a little, because you are such a kind lady, ha ha..how could you possible write something scary? But as I read it, I felt something very deep in it, as if you were saying something dark and evil has got you under it's spell.
But the poem is not really frightening, it is a little like the Alfred Hitchock movies made me feel..uneasy.

Good job on this, I would like to see you write a horror poem for children one day:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

This is something different by you & its done
very well too! I enjoyed this read :D

This is a very powerful write from you Sylvia... Penned with a lot of emotion I thought Lol. An excellent piece. Sylvia.... you're the best.

Lots of love,
Olwin.

Another well penned piece from you.Good job.
Paul...