Katie,

There is something about the way you write that makes the reader feel your pains so clearly..this poem makes me see how a girl is torn apart because of abuse..the mind retreats when the pain becomes too much..I have been there too, sweetheart..my head has had so many concussions I fear I will some day become an Alzheimer patient..and you carry these scars with you always..mostly on your soul.

The only thing I can say to you is try to report it, if it is a real story..I never did, but wish I had..make the sob pay

God bless you hun,

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

That was one powerful poem great job!

10/5

Wow omg xoxo

This poem was really well written. Just, a little hard for me to read...very painful. Like Ingrid de k said, the way you write makes the reader feel your pain. Its an excellent write though. xox

Amazing write. The pain that comes through your writing really gets to me.. Really powerful poem. Great piece.

That was heartbreaking and very very powerrful and amazing...... I'm sure many ask but is that real?

I agree with Ingrid, Tell someone. Anyone who feels the same way I do please comment.