Closing you eyes to the sight
Remembering your last dream
His body hits the ground
A scream, a scream, a scream

I love the last line of this stanza, its perfect the way you repeated it three times. Hearing voices in your head? Maybe not the best thing but a great muse for a poem. Well done Renee :)

You murdered someone since the last time we spoke!? :|
Niice.

Well written;
Pain in every sentence, as usual.

xx

Some deep sh1t wow.. love it