Seasons In The Sun

by Cindy   Jan 18, 2010


Seasons In The Sun

Remaining suspended in time
Life's seasons have come and gone
Months, hours, minutes mean nothing
Existence plays like an old song

When it seems nothing is left
Rewinding over in the mind
Happy memories fingers grasp
Hope moments of pleasure to find

Days in the sun are no longer
Light's rays won't penetrate these walls
Living now in solitude
Arms reach out, embracing death's call

Souls reunited once more
Running barefoot in the sand
Laughter's music fills the air
True love eternal hand in hand

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Written by: Cynthia Graver
Jan 7, 2010

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  • 10 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A truly excellent write, Cindy - well done.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    ;_;

    this was beautiful. it made me think about how we all get older and sitting in an old-folks home, they sit and stare out the window like a caged bird. stuck in a continous state of nostalgia.

    they remember playing outside in their youth.

    "Running barefoot in the sand
    Laughter's music fills the air"

    brilliant. i think i'll favorite this, if you don't mind :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Cindy,

    ~Such beauty and a lovely masterpiece~

    Take care,
    Ray

  • 15 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    "True love eternal hand in hand.."

    What a way to end the poem dearest Cindy. This is a 5 for me.

    Somehow, this write has an element of sadness, but also a little bit of hope.. Always keep that hope.

  • 15 years ago

    by ben thompson

    This was perfect in everyway, you manage to jerk the heart to tears. praise God for the hope he gives his people of a life after this one. 5/5 you've become an outstanding poet...

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