by Melissa Jan 19, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
According to you I'm stupid, I'm useless, I can't do anything right. according to you I'm difficult, hard to please, forever changing my mind.I'm a mess in a dress, can't show up on time, even if it would save my life. according to you... According to you. |
I would recommend breaking up the stanzas a little bit to make it an easier read. But all in all I truly enjoyed reading that! Many emotions, good work! 5/5 |