I loved your creativity in this, and it was very meaningful.
You did a great job making a simple object, such as the pepsi can, very symbolical.
Keep it up.

This is a very great write. I haven't read a poem about a Pepsi Can and it is amazing how you can create such emotion by an ordinary Pepsi Can

God..i love how u wrote this..its amazingg 5/5

I love that such a small thing like a pepsi can can truly hold so much meaning. I love that you could show so much meaning in that one object. I would like to have seen a little more elaboration though. From this I only get that you remember the can from when she sat at her desk. I would like to see what else about the can reminds you of her.

Extremely creative. The single object brought back so much to your memory and that truly is the way it happens! Very real and sincere.
I though that the story went smoothly.
Perhaps the ending could've been stronger, but I don't dislike it the way it is now.
Also, very good title! Caught my attention for sure.

4/5.(:

This is brilliant! though sad and touching, Lol. You really draw the reader in with your poems... Your'e becoming a favourite! Well done.. :)

Very creative and thoughtout.

Wow again. you are inspiring both me and my friend who is also reading with me.incredable ability you have

This poem was awesome!! I know the feeling of how one simple thing can bring back memories that haunt you! And even though it is something like a pepsi can it can remind you of that person and you can still feel heartbroken. I loved this!! The emotion was so real and believable!! :P