Radiant Corridors

by Lonely Rider   Jan 19, 2010


Radiant Corridors (Lira)

Corridors effervescent,
wild meadows immersed in amber brilliance,
trickles dewdrop - translucent,
delicate pink radiance,
dispersed in milieu- a contagious buoyance.

**Lira:
A 5 line Spanish poetry form
with syllable counts of 7-11-7-7-11
and a rhyme scheme of ababb

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I agree with the people above. This was a beautiful piece and really does justice to the style. I love the diction here. Very strong but doesn't overpower your emotions. Very clever piece dear. You amaze me everytime :) Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Well done with the challenge! I like your
    choice of words which paints a beautiful image..good job :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was absolutely beautiful & was written perfectly to fit the form. Awesome job. :]

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