by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG Jan 20, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Tell me why it has to be this way, |
by iRobbiee
I really like this poem well I like all your poems I think that you are a very amazing writer I can always relate to what you write. |
by kidheir
Enjoyed the read your word choice was fantastic, i loved how it was simple yet it drew you in. a excellent read |
Excellent word choice, throughout the piece. "Where we have absolutely no control, |
by Lady Nik
I liked how simple this was. Straight to the point without all of those complex words and forms. I think people will get this more because you're feelings were intense and real and ones that people could relate to. Everyone wants to be loved and have someone care about them and be there and it's hard to understand why we lose those things or never have them to begin with. I think your words are very profound and let people see that they aren't alone. Nik |
This was amazing. i really love the flow of the words and just the storyline itself. it's completely heartbreaking and beautiful. greta job! :) would you please read mine? "put to rest" |