This is one of those writes that tickles the brain; really makes the reader think. I enjoyed your play on words. It is quite different from your others poems. Your choice of words was perfect. 5/5.

People always say free form is the best form of poetry and I'd have to disagree. Although at times it may be, I say poets who can get the same message across while rhyming with flow are the best. Excellent work 5/5

Absolutely loved it!

Great poem. It's a little different than the others I've read, but still interesting.

This was different, but i liked it! "The true light refracts through the prism
Rainbow colors contain mysticism" great job! :)

Kinda lost me at the deism mark, but nice meter, and meaning.