This brings back a lot of emotional feelings for me, I had a miscarriage at 21, I was very sad and depressed, but as you said, nature did what it had to do, I dont think it was the right time for me and till this day, even after having two beautiful children, I still wonder what baby wouldve looked like... The pain gets easier as time goes on, but the what if is always there. A beautiful, heartfelt and emotional write.

I feel in a way this is a lot like my poem, but with a crazy twist. Now its the mother who never had a choice and since she doesn't have a choice neither does the child and nobody can hear their freedom cries :( Excellent job on such a sad topic 5/5

I can't help think of what'd it be like

^^ I think you meant: 'I can't help but think of what'd it be like' ?? Just seems like you meant to input a word somewhere but forgot it.

Overall, beautiful write. For someone who hasn't even been through such, you did an amazing job capturing the emotion. Also, you asked a lot of questions; questions that a mother who is going through something such as a miscarriage would ask. And that makes this write even more great. There isnt much more that I can say, other than you are a very talented writer. And the fact that you wrote this for someone else, shows that you are a wonderful person as well.

Nicely written
5/5

-KJ

"Woven together by love
Torn apart by circumstance
It hurts me inside to know
You never had a fighting chance"

I was captivated by the first stanza... Amazing piece. That was truly beautiful. The amount of emotion as well as your perfect choice of words completely leave me speechless.

5/5