Comments : Passive Farewell

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Anthony
    This is so very sad to me. I'm sure because I spend so much time alone.

    my existence alone is not so terrible
    and in solitude I can hurt only myself

    These lines really stand out to me when reading your piece. What sad feelings come from these words.
    Great job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Such a short write yet so powerful in emotion. Sad words you have penned here, but well done to say the least .

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sometimes it's for the best just to end it, if it no longer feels right and you know that all you do is hurt the other. Very sad, but wise write.

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I loved this piece, short, yet powerful and I think something many of us out here can relate to, great work!