I definately love the idea of this poem and the title. So many people (girls especially) are afriad to be the first one to say I love you. So we wait and let time play more of a factor in the relationship before we rush into it. Very good job on this piece it was indepth and flowed perfectly. Great work 5/5 |
by Mr Rhee
Loved the wording in this. I think we all knows these fears. We just don't always have a way of admitting it to ourselves. Well written. |