The daydreams

by Adam Murphy   Jan 21, 2010


I'm laying here
awake in my room
my eyes aren't shut
yet I'm dreaming of you
I imagine us both
laying under the stars
No cares in the world
because together its ours
your head on my shoulder
our bodies held close
"You know your mine forever"
I'd happily boast
You'd look up and grin
ask me "is that so?"
and using a kiss for a period
I'd say "You already know."
those thoughts drift away
back to reality it seems
but at least i know for certain
your still mine in my dreams.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Aww, wow. this is really good!

    I like it alot and the words seem to draw you to that moment and make you feel what was felt!

    Great job! ^_^ 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    "I'm laying here
    awake in my room
    my eyes aren't shut
    yet I'm dreaming of you"
    - that was a lovely beginning, i loved it!

    im pretty sure we can all relate to this poem in some way ... i know i can, which is what makes it that much better! nice work :) i liked this a lot!

  • 14 years ago

    by M I L L Y

    Now this is my type of poems =]
    this happens to me all the time! damn

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A stunning write...! Lol. I came back to check out your poems as its been a long time since ive read/commented and Im not disappointed :) Love your writing/poems which are so tenderly written. Very well done!

    A Beautiful poem, so wonderfully expressed.

  • 14 years ago

    by XxXMissSweetPeaXxX

    Awww thats soo sweet..lol
    i like that its cute. but also awesome.

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