Ocean child

by theory of the loser   Jan 22, 2010


Three worlds, you'd say with a smile,
you'll rule the dark one someday,
a blank tragic look, my hope,
I know you really want to stay,

I know what the doctors truly think, you only sleep,
breaking down, it'll be over in a blink,
when we went to the water's edge,
you'd always ask me if someone could really sink,
you always wanted answers, it's all my fault,

they give you minutes to live, if i was faster you'd have years,
you almost drown, when I got to you red fell from your ears,
pressure,
swimming in the ocean, with no wisdom or cares,

your eyes close, a last breath,
no last words, an ocean child's death.

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  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    You have a unique writting style. this is
    a excellent piece but it seems personal
    the last two lines is where you shine. 5/5