I like this poem, not for the exact story behind it...but for the feelings I was able to take from it. Most of the stanzas seemed kind of random; like troubled thoughts taking over in form. I have one suggestion in order to make it flow a little better:

"With the strength of just string
Just give them a pen
Just watch what people will bring"

Try: Just watch what people bring.

It kinda helps when you don't have to stumble over the beginning lines. Other than that, I enjoyed the read.