I like how it doesn't have a strict structure but it still seems to flow
i like the lines i was outside my comfort zone yet had never felt safer
i think it describes that first attraction when you're getting to know someone really well
4/5

5/5 this one is very nice. thers a ray of light. and i hope something nice comes of that night. i know there was a special light on your face when i saw u around that time. and i'd like to see it more. i like the way you've broken up the poem and i really hope some more happiness comes