Still a Dream

by Shinobi   Jan 22, 2010


Those warm brown eyes will haunt me forever
Such fleshy red lips for only me to kiss
For this everlasting beauty, I surrender
My heart and mind are at eternal bliss

Grieving for a time spent alone, far away
Awaiting the reunion with endless anticipation
Thoughts, reminiscing your loving touch
Awakening my caring inspiration

Forever craving for your loving heart
Reaching out so you could hear my scream
Giving you my whole from the start
You are my soul, my flesh, my dream

So as the stray skies above foretold
The sun will rise and forever stay
For now you know I'm yours to hold
With each loving, embracing new day

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  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Your poems are heartfelt and excellent and I can tell you put a lot of effort into it, but I still can't understand why in every poem you have one stanza that strays away from the rhyme scheme? I think if you keep writing as well as you do but make sure to focus on what you rhyme and don't rhyme you'll be that much better. Rhyming isn't for everyone maybe try some free verse? I enjoy your peotry outside of the rhyme scheme mistakes haha excellent work none the less I guess

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This made me kind of sad. I think dreams are one of the most imortant parts of life. Without dreams how do we know what we really wnat in life. Anywho I loved the imagery once again in this piece, the diction was also good too. Nice work overall. Nik

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