This made me kind of sad. I think dreams are one of the most imortant parts of life. Without dreams how do we know what we really wnat in life. Anywho I loved the imagery once again in this piece, the diction was also good too. Nice work overall. Nik

Your poems are heartfelt and excellent and I can tell you put a lot of effort into it, but I still can't understand why in every poem you have one stanza that strays away from the rhyme scheme? I think if you keep writing as well as you do but make sure to focus on what you rhyme and don't rhyme you'll be that much better. Rhyming isn't for everyone maybe try some free verse? I enjoy your peotry outside of the rhyme scheme mistakes haha excellent work none the less I guess