In Hell Again

I liked the 4/2 scheme and it was an easy read, didn't feel forced or clunky. Nice job :)

This was a very strong poem. I liked it all the way through.
The imagary methods you used were classic and known ones. The rhymes made the flow go perfectly.
The line: "I want to love but love always falls apart." is a very strong one, and now more than ever I feel attached to it.
You explained your point here very clearly, about a relationship meant to be broekn... So every day is like hell. I don't think there's anything here to fix. Nice work 5/5

Emotional piece. Very sad and honest. But beautifully written eh. This deserves a 5 all the way around (I dont understand how it has a 4.7 right now to be honest). But, keep up the amazing writes Nik.

-KJ

I liked the poem for all it was sad, I think the sad poems are often the best because most of the time they contain the most emotion. I thought the flow in the poem was pretty good, and the rhymes matched up pretty well too, though I wasn't sure about real and kill, but overall it was a good poem. I could relate to a lot of what the poem was saying especially with the second to last stanza, but My favorite lines from the poem were actually these:
"Wishing this was all pretend like the beating of my heart
I want to love but love always falls apart."

I liked them because of how you described the beating of your heart as pretendm, like you're not sure it's there anymore because of all of this and hurting. Overall you did a good job on the poem. 5/5

Amazing. i know the feeling. I think it's a good subject for people to relate to. it flowed well. 5/5
Rachel