A Taste of Forever. [Butterfly Oddquain]

by Courageous Dreamer   Jan 24, 2010


You-
paralyze
me beautifully
with your idyllic embrace-
kiss.
tracing your love upon lips
of ruby passion.
a taste of...
forever.

Syllable Count:
1-3-5-7-1-7-5-3-1.

*Thank you Samia for introducing this form to me.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was such a cute love gem! I just couldn't hold back my smile, and what I admired was your simple wording that was pieced together to create.....tasteful perfection.

    Absolutely magnificent, you keep it up now, like I know you will!

    God bless you and your family.

    ~MA

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You are right there, when we are in the embrace of the significant other it feels like being paralysed, lol.

    I like this format, it's cute. A real eyecatcher, loved the wording also, very romantic:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Temps
    This is beautiful. Each word paints a vivid image for the readers mind.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...this was amazing. I really don't know what else to say. I'm gonna have to give this a try. Lovely wording hun :) This style fits you well. Nik

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