Your last line may be off by one syllable-other than that beautiful nature poem-could be about a tropical forest or a jungle-either or a wonderful job. |
by Dreamofolwin
Briliant job on the Lira Joe... Loved the imagery. Well done! |
by Cindy
JOe |
by Rachel RTVW
The syllable count is fine. I love the word choice and vivid imagery in this piece! Great job on this form! |