by Melpomene Jan 24, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
"All that we are is the result of what we have thought. If a man speaks or acts with an evil thought, pain follows him. If a man speaks or acts with a pure thought, happiness follows him, like a shadow that never leaves him." |
I agree with illu :"D |
by Rachel RTVW
^Pandora's box was |
I have to say that this poem was truly beautiful and thought provoking. I love the use of imagery and the flow of the poem is amazing. Great job. |
You have such a distinctive style of writing and never cease to amaze me. This was no different. Imagination was definatly there, I was amazed by 'lilac stars' I immediately fell in love with this poem from the start. Its definatly a challenge to pick one favorite part, I couldnt stop reading. Nicely done . |
by Rachel RTVW
I can not pick a favorite part. It was uniquely penned. Great imagery, word choice, use of metaphors, flow and structure. |