With You, I Take Flight

by Tsukuyomi   Jan 24, 2010


We are all born with potential,
The wings necessary to take flight.
Their size matters not,
For it is the path we take upon the sky that defines us.

Here I lay, bound by the chains,
Known simply as love.
You are MY key, the precious key.
Not only to my freedom but to my heart.
So it is with you I shall soar and take my place,
Amongst the stars.

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is amazing! And you have a very good point, well I'm taking enough of your time already; so nice job. I love this poem and it is so well written. Awesome job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lori

    This is seriously so beautiful. I found that everything you wrote had a huge touch of compassion for this special person you wrote for! I loved the emotional structure and the unique quality you put into it. Great job! 5/5!

  • 14 years ago

    by yblehs

    "We are all born with potential,
    The wings necessary to take flight."

    I don't know, but that line really just touched me. It's like we are all capable of doing what we can, falling in love, doing something, because we all have the tools. This is beautiful.
    five outta five!

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