"We are all born with potential,
The wings necessary to take flight."

I don't know, but that line really just touched me. It's like we are all capable of doing what we can, falling in love, doing something, because we all have the tools. This is beautiful.
five outta five!

This is seriously so beautiful. I found that everything you wrote had a huge touch of compassion for this special person you wrote for! I loved the emotional structure and the unique quality you put into it. Great job! 5/5!

This is amazing! And you have a very good point, well I'm taking enough of your time already; so nice job. I love this poem and it is so well written. Awesome job!